白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-10 20:01:11 Post subject: |
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谢谢.问好荷梦 |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-12 00:59:10 Post subject: |
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拜读、欣赏。 |
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huamei 童生
Joined: 12 Aug 2007 Posts: 13
huameiCollection |
Posted: 2007-08-12 01:07:58 Post subject: hao |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-16 02:02:36 Post subject: |
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短诗结合图片耐品,通观评语,这样的交流好。远握。 |
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彭世学 秀才
Joined: 24 Jun 2007 Posts: 187 Location: 中国 彭世学Collection |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-16 17:12:26 Post subject: |
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白水先生的诗歌
配上鲜艳的画
特别有魅力. |
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尹宗国 童生
Joined: 17 Jul 2007 Posts: 31
尹宗国Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-16 17:25:13 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
阳关夺目?
夕照? |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-16 19:18:05 Post subject: |
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谢谢各位朋友鼓励, 这是临屏之作, 可以说是一时灵感, 抑或说是蕴藏于心思绪的外溢吧.
文字上或许欠斟酌 |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-17 01:04:44 Post subject: |
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两段落差大,动情。 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-18 03:14:36 Post subject: |
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谢谢新华, 问好 |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-19 02:30:13 Post subject: |
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再读,敢问老师作画吗?还望多提意见,谢谢。 |
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白水 大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-19 13:17:57 Post subject: |
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哦, 不好意思, 我只喜欢赏画, 却无作画之才.
大家以诗会友, 诗歌只是我业余爱好, 称老师我真不敢当. 多交流,问好朋友. |
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新华 秀才
Joined: 29 Jul 2007 Posts: 225
新华Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-19 18:29:27 Post subject: |
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写出了人的本质 |
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