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黑鹰等几个小玩艺儿

左岸
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Posted: 2006-10-29 14:21:34 Post subject: 黑鹰等几个小玩艺儿

■月亮一扇银白色的门一个小女孩推开走进去再走出来满头大雪 ■锯你我的目光，碰到一起的时候合成了一把锯条。接下来我们开始拉大锯。你来我往，锯生活这块木头我们用力越大，脚下的爱就堆积的越多 ■小花伏案写作，思绪远走他乡。突然，身后传来一声细致的声音我回首四处寻找老半天发现是墙角一株小花小猫一样咪叫了一下 ■黑鹰现在我要描述的是一只黑鹰从二千米高处滑落，对于天空来说只不过少了一粒沙子但大地，却多了一块需重新洗牌的夜 ■一场新雨后一场新雨后总有一些意想不到的事情发生譬如，在水洼，一枚落叶，自由自在地谩游高空的恐惧感巳被熨平，但我同时发现在水洼底，安静地躺着一张熟睡的脸不知是谁昨夜与一位姑娘吻别之后而忘记拿走 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

赵福治
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Posted: 2006-10-29 18:43:54 Post subject:

我们用力越大，脚下的爱就堆积的越多 .............有张力的一组,提读.

维鹿延
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Posted: 2006-10-30 04:02:27 Post subject:

这就是诗的美妙了，一点思绪，也有万千翅膀。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

左岸
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Posted: 2006-11-02 02:39:06 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

我们用力越大，脚下的爱
就堆积的越多
.............有张力的一组,提读.

问好福治，谢谢，遥握！
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黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

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Posted: 2006-11-02 02:41:11 Post subject:

维鹿延 wrote:

这就是诗的美妙了，一点思绪，也有万千翅膀。

问好鹿延，点评也妙极，谢谢，遥握！
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燕庄生铁
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Posted: 2009-06-14 04:49:45 Post subject:

小诗味足。拜读左岸先生。

原筱菲
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Posted: 2009-06-14 16:05:37 Post subject:

特别喜欢这样小的，但自己不敢写^_^拜见老师！ _________________ 我的邮箱：piaoluodehudie@126.com 我的博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/tangguowufeifei

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Posted: 2009-06-15 22:20:20 Post subject:

拉鋸所生的愛越拉的多越愛哈,真有意思! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2009-06-15 22:22:36 Post subject:

小诗挺难写的，佩服

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