Lake 举人
注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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发表于: 2007-08-01 11:00:25 发表主题: short poems (31-40) |
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(写多了,水分也多了。向100 首进军顾不上这许多了。)
31
through mists
looms a ridged mountain range
dragon in clouds
32
floating cream and scum
cover up undercurrents -
Dow Jones up and down
33
this is Singapore
that I’ve heard but never been
on my “to-tour list”
34
to the abacus
the computer groans and bows-
immune from virus
35
a wild gush of wind
blows water into ripples
a moon floats away
36
wild boars roam
on vast greens
grass bows to the wind
37
a lone jackal howls
to the shivering stars
a meteorite falls
38
after the deluge
a wrecked boat afloat
her master unseen
39
a Sixties disco
must’ve differed from n-ties.
You leave, I enter.
40
the Night Jay sings
to the tune of
“once in a blue moon”
. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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kokho 进士出身
注册时间: 2006-11-30 帖子: 2642 来自: Singapore kokho北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2007-08-01 11:27:13 发表主题: |
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through mists
looms a ridged mountain range
dragon in clouds
<> 这首很有气势 :)
to the abacus
the computer groans and bows-
immune from virus
<> I like this one
this is Singapore
that I’ve heard but never been
on my “to-tour list”
<> I will take leave to be your tour guide
the Night Jay sings
to the tune of
“once in a blue moon”
<> You are aware of the blue moon now )
35
a wild gush of wind
blows water into ripples
a moon floats away
36
wild boars roam
on vast greens
grass bows to the wind
37
a lone jackal howls
to the shivering stars
a meteorite falls
<><><> These 3 are the real Zen Stuff Congrats you have enlightened!!! _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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Lake 举人
注册时间: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
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发表于: 2007-08-01 18:59:17 发表主题: |
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谢谢 Kokho 逐首点评。
把 38 换下去了,怕引起旖旎的“瞎想”。
Enlightened? I hope I am...
But it is not that easy. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
注册时间: 2007-06-10 帖子: 3950 来自: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2007-08-02 05:30:55 发表主题: |
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so many of them are so good. I like no.37 best. thank you for your good work, Lake! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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kokho 进士出身
注册时间: 2006-11-30 帖子: 2642 来自: Singapore kokho北美枫文集 |
发表于: 2007-08-02 06:02:14 发表主题: |
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好热闹 :)
。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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