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				|  发表于: 2007-08-01 11:00:25    发表主题: short poems (31-40) |   |  
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				| (写多了,水分也多了。向100 首进军顾不上这许多了。) 
 31
 through mists
 looms a ridged mountain range
 dragon in clouds
 
 32
 floating cream and scum
 cover up undercurrents -
 Dow Jones up and down
 
 33
 this is Singapore
 that I’ve heard but never been
 on my “to-tour list”
 
 34
 to the abacus
 the computer groans and bows-
 immune from virus
 
 35
 a wild gush of wind
 blows water into ripples
 a moon floats away
 
 36
 wild boars roam
 on vast greens
 grass bows to the wind
 
 37
 a lone jackal howls
 to the shivering stars
 a meteorite falls
 
 38
 after the deluge
 a wrecked boat afloat
 her master unseen
 
 39
 a Sixties disco
 must’ve differed from n-ties.
 You leave, I enter.
 
 40
 the Night Jay sings
 to the tune of
 “once in a blue moon”
 
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 the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
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				|  发表于: 2007-08-01 11:27:13    发表主题: |   |  
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				| through mists looms a ridged mountain range
 dragon in clouds
 <> 这首很有气势 :)
 
 to the abacus
 the computer groans and bows-
 immune from virus
 <> I like this one
 
 this is Singapore
 that I’ve heard but never been
 on my “to-tour list”
 <> I will take leave to be your tour guide
 
 the Night Jay sings
 to the tune of
 “once in a blue moon”
 <> You are aware of the blue moon now
  ) 
 
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 a wild gush of wind
 blows water into ripples
 a moon floats away
 
 36
 wild boars roam
 on vast greens
 grass bows to the wind
 
 37
 a lone jackal howls
 to the shivering stars
 a meteorite falls
 
 <><><> These 3 are the real Zen Stuff Congrats you have enlightened!!!
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				|  发表于: 2007-08-01 18:59:17    发表主题: |   |  
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				| 谢谢 Kokho 逐首点评。 
 把 38 换下去了,怕引起旖旎的“瞎想”。
   
 Enlightened? I hope I am...
 But it is not that easy.
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				|  发表于: 2007-08-02 05:30:55    发表主题: |   |  
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				| so many of them are so good. I like no.37 best. thank you for your good work, Lake! _________________
 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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				|  发表于: 2007-08-02 06:02:14    发表主题: |   |  
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				| 好热闹 :) 
 。。
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