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《再回首》
了因大兄
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PostPosted: 2007-07-07 08:30:22    Post subject: 《再回首》 Reply with quote

《再回首》


每一次,都是这样
一颗呆在木头里的钉
被爱回忆的钉锤,突然
从一些琐事中拔起。

每一次,都是这样
往回飞奔的太快
树上的叶,还亮如鱼鳞。
幻想,还呆在原地
缘木求鱼。

每一次,都是这样
我总是飞不过
那片桃花林。
那片桃花林,其实
早就不在了。

每一次,都是这样
从那回来
钉锤想把钉牢牢地
钉在现实里,
现实,仿佛
刹那间,成了铁打的。

2007/7/7
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我不是树上的黑木耳,我被爱过
不能随随便便不回家
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桔子
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PostPosted: 2007-07-07 12:59:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

明晰,真切.喜读. Smile
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-07-07 18:19:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

每一次,都是这样
我总是飞不过
那片桃花林。 ........比较喜欢这一节.
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2007-07-30 22:46:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

多读几首了因大兄的诗,要找到共性了。
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