William Zhou周道模
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 Posted: 2007-07-26 16:31:04 Post subject: [原创双语诗] Flying of the Fish |
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请师友批评.
鱼 的 飞 翔
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啜食水中的云朵
鱼 就想天空的蓝
就想去看云朵的故乡
鱼 尾巴当翅膀
飞出自己的水乡……
白鹭俯冲掠水
吞了 鱼
鱼的 梦想
在白鹭的生命中
飞 …… 翔 ……
2003、4、28上午9：00于红房子
Flying of the Fish
by William Zhou
Sips the clouds in water
A fish thinks of the blue in sky
Wants to see the hometown of clouds
The fish is using its tail as wings
Out of its own hometown …
An egret diving and skating over water
The fish is swallowed
In the life of the egret
The dream of the fish
Still … flying …
25th-07-07 translated
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| Posted: 2007-07-29 13:42:22 Post subject: |
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形象的转化升华 有味道；
思想和禅意 还可以再提高 。。。
 
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2007-07-30 06:38:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢。对英文有无修改意见？
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| Posted: 2007-07-30 10:33:27 Post subject: |
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给你一个 提议，这样的讨论，这里 LAKE最厉害的 ：））
赶快闪，等下榻可要 发飙了。。。
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