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小诗四首
了因大兄
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 08:31:10    Post subject: 小诗四首 Reply with quote

小诗四首
  

《背景》

从高到低,依次是
蓝色的。白色的。红色的。
绿色的。黄色的。

白羊侧身,让黑羊
先上山去。

白羊。黑羊。
生活在一片
缓缓倾斜的草地。

2007/7/21

《天空这条河》

在水中,月亮和白荷共用过一张脸
白鹭从水中升起,白荷的浪漫
也上了青天。

羽毛,飘浮在天空
仿佛白荷,把给你的
一瓣瓣时光
轻轻放在水面。

2007/7/16

《纷红的微笑》

梨花的丢了,桃花的还在。
支持她,用轮回的孤独
远离椭圆的枣红。

她的微笑,照亮了茶花
飘浮的嘲笑。她,微笑
从不争辩。我隐隐约约
感觉,有淡淡的柠檬
浸入孤独的伤口。

2007/7/23

《华容道》

曹操走来,关公横刀。

理想的曲线上,这只赋诗的槊
眼看要折了。

然。义,由心生。
义,有岐路。
此时此地,义
也是刀刃上的道。

2007/7/23
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 16:08:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

深沉的思索, 浪漫的笔触.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-23 17:59:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

第二首最漂亮:浪漫,飘逸,意境优美!
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