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PostPosted: 2007-07-20 11:23:14    Post subject: the refresh button Reply with quote

the refresh button

with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
why knobs on both sides

刷面出新

按一下鼠耳
世界立马更旧新
何两端门把
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PostPosted: 2007-07-20 20:19:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
很棒

why knobs on both sides
不懂

why knobs on both sides?
We need enter and exit
just like yin and yang
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 15:34:55    Post subject: Re: the refresh button Reply with quote

[quote="博弈"]the refresh button

with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
why knobs on both sides

刷面出新

按一下鼠耳
世界立马更旧新
何两端门把

试译前两句:
只简单一击鼠标
整个世界就变了模样
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 18:06:10    Post subject: Re: the refresh button Reply with quote

[quote="William Zhou周道模"]
博弈 wrote:
the refresh button

with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
why knobs on both sides

刷面出新

按一下鼠耳
世界立马更旧新
何两端门把

试译前两句:
只简单一击鼠标
整个世界就变了模样


谢谢,你要试着把它变 5-7-5字音,俳句的一式。这形式是不是有点无聊?
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PostPosted: 2007-07-24 18:11:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lake wrote:
with a simple click
the whole world is up to date
很棒

why knobs on both sides
不懂

why knobs on both sides?
We need enter and exit
just like yin and yang


one way to address your question is

if a click is all we need to get the world updated (virtual);
then knobs to shut or greet the world are outdated (real).
is it?

better get out of chair and away from screen,
reach for the knob
and get some fresh air now... Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 07:05:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for your elaboration 博弈.
And your suggestion, feel like going to Cold Mountain now. Rolling Eyes

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这形式是不是有点无聊?


自由式最有的聊。还要那些蝶式,蛙式,仰式...干吗。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-29 13:25:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读 很好的讨论 :)
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