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月光曲

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Posted: 2007-07-10 17:05:28 Post subject: 月光曲

1 翘檐引风，挽不住白云天蓝蓝，欲滴欲滴而终不滴痒痒的，月光在心里生芽 2 当寂寞来袭，便仰望有蛙鸣坐在月光里等恋人前来吟诗 3 爱是预言中的轮回染上月光便开始发酵两个城市之间，远隔千年 4 舀一瓢月光饮马风尘重压着倦游的灵魂蹄声的的，开在谁的梦中？ 5 有蜻蜓一点再点月光遂一圈圈洇开淹没了谁的相思？ 6 谁的梦盛不下相思溢流了一地月光？例如一个名字婷婷立在莲上 7 思念得久了影子也被月光蒸发在谁的梦里凝结成诗？ 8 月光下美人鱼游来整个世界屏住呼吸四季渐渐削瘦 9 对月面壁不觉已是千年谁的心还在仰望？ 10 在高低起伏的混凝土丛林里游成一尾营养不良的鱼霓虹照来，古老的月光蒸发殆尽前三首曾以别的题目发过，或略有改动。浪费了大家的时间，在此致歉。 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-07-10 22:35:11 Post subject:

问好奥冬，只要是真诚的作品，会有很多人喜欢的：） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-07-11 00:22:12 Post subject:

问好金金 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-07-11 01:09:24 Post subject:

我一直以为诗不厌改． _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-07-11 17:36:57 Post subject:

感谢韩兄欣赏，问好 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-07-11 18:34:43 Post subject:

很喜欢这种诗的意境！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-07-13 07:14:30 Post subject:

当寂寞来龚，便仰望龚～～？是不是袭？？ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2007-07-14 00:27:59 Post subject:

再提！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-07-15 17:00:35 Post subject:

阿依琼裙 wrote:

当寂寞来龚，便仰望

龚～～？是不是袭？？

是我粗心了,感谢诗友关注.
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Posted: 2007-07-15 17:03:15 Post subject:

感谢大家的欣赏与品读,一并问好 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2007-07-15 17:42:36 Post subject:

有一些很灵动的诗句,喜欢!

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Posted: 2007-07-15 18:18:41 Post subject:

淡雅, 清丽

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Posted: 2007-07-15 23:13:03 Post subject:

谢过两位朋友的品读，远握问好 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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