博弈
榜眼
注册时间: 2006-12-21
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来自: SFO
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 发表于: 2007-07-07 18:57:35 发表主题: before i lose it |
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before i lose it
i close the door
left it unlocked in case just
u knock on it
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Lake
举人
注册时间: 2007-01-09
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| 发表于: 2007-07-08 10:06:29 发表主题: |
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u knock on it
no one answers the door
a dog barks at u
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kino
秀才
注册时间: 2006-12-23
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来自: beijing
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| 发表于: 2007-07-08 17:35:42 发表主题: |
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before i nose it
i close the door
left it unlocked in case
u knock on it
when I'm not there
and the dog barks at u
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白水
大学士
注册时间: 2006-10-02
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来自: TORONTO
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| 发表于: 2007-07-08 17:53:18 发表主题: |
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if nobody is here
why did u close the door?
you can drink a lot
sleep on the floor
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博弈
榜眼
注册时间: 2006-12-21
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来自: SFO
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| 发表于: 2007-07-08 22:14:44 发表主题: |
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felt an interesting thread here, from my 'door' mind thread to Lake's 'dog' to kino's 'nose' to Moonlight's 'nobody'. how poetic thought evolves.
短的英文诗接龙，也是很有趣啊！
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William Zhou周道模
探花
注册时间: 2007-06-10
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来自: 中国四川广汉
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| 发表于: 2007-07-09 18:21:42 发表主题: |
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interesting,humor,flying thought!
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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