博弈 榜眼
註册時間: 2006-12-21 帖子: 4381 來自: SFO 博弈北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-07 18:57:35 發錶主題: before i lose it |
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before i lose it
i close the door
left it unlocked in case just
u knock on it _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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Lake 举人
註册時間: 2007-01-09 帖子: 1286
Lake北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-08 10:06:29 發錶主題: |
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u knock on it
no one answers the door
a dog barks at u _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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kino 秀才
註册時間: 2006-12-23 帖子: 411 來自: beijing kino北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-08 17:35:42 發錶主題: |
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before i nose it
i close the door
left it unlocked in case
u knock on it
when I'm not there
and the dog barks at u
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白水 大学士
註册時間: 2006-10-02 帖子: 14102 來自: TORONTO 白水北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-08 17:53:18 發錶主題: |
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if nobody is here
why did u close the door?
you can drink a lot
sleep on the floor
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博弈 榜眼
註册時間: 2006-12-21 帖子: 4381 來自: SFO 博弈北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-08 22:14:44 發錶主題: |
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felt an interesting thread here, from my 'door' mind thread to Lake's 'dog' to kino's 'nose' to Moonlight's 'nobody'. how poetic thought evolves.
短的英文诗接龙,也是很有趣啊! _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
註册時間: 2007-06-10 帖子: 3950 來自: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模北美楓文集 |
發錶於: 2007-07-09 18:21:42 發錶主題: |
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interesting,humor,flying thought! _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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