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Evening Stroll

Lake
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Posted: 2007-06-07 09:38:20 Post subject: Evening Stroll

Evening Stroll ?A winding trail sunlight dim in the woods ?as dusk falls. Nearby a sudden water splash a mother duck leads her brood ?swimming away. 信步 ?黄昏一条蜿蜒的小路上 ?林中光线晦暝不远处，突然水声泼刺一只母鸭领着一群小鸭 ?怡然游去再来首短的，发现短诗容易写些？慢慢再加长，再一题多写。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-06-23 06:07:03 Post subject:

Lake
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Posted: 2007-06-25 16:57:19 Post subject:

_________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-07-01 22:23:44 Post subject:

林中光线 [渐] 晦泼刺 - 这个不能打发声词：））这好像是女人的专用形容词。。。快闪！！！。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-07-02 18:33:38 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

林中光线 [渐] 晦

泼刺 - 这个不能打发声词：））

这好像是女人的专用形容词。。。

Cool

快闪！！！

。

闪哪儿去？

泼刺：象声词，形容鱼在水里跳跃的声音。也说泼刺刺。（《现代汉语词典》）
没注明 F or M, so I guess 男女通用。

我不闪。 Cool

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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-07-03 23:21:30 Post subject:

立场坚定：））。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

Lake
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Posted: 2007-07-05 21:31:21 Post subject:

旗帜鲜明 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-07-11 13:55:05 Post subject:

我俩好像是说相声啦　；））． _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2007-08-15 16:06:44 Post subject:

第一节英语和汉语的“象”与“意”都差异较大，请问 Lake 是怎样考虑的？ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2007-08-16 19:36:09 Post subject:

谢谢 William 的提问。这首小诗算是双语创作吧，所以不是一字一句直译的。先写的英文，写中文时，句子的先后顺序就按中文的习惯排列了。意思大概还没走样。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-08-19 03:27:25 Post subject:

lake is maturing as a poetess )　． _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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