I met you in the sky

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I met you in the sky


.

Said, you were bored with life
Wanted to dump out its sediment
The silhouette of this past tense
Says, I wanted to travel, if only
Got a ticket to could-have-beens
I would have bagged nothing

..


She picked a morning to draw the sky
Limited it to black and white
Clouds were white, the sun was …
The air had a plan

A pencil—not sure 2B lead or not 2B— dropped from the sky
Varying shades it brought along
”Every brush I lay on you” bid she
”You in the shade return to the tail of my core
Imprint my canvas with thumbs of souls”

Unfinished is a sketch of
the moss of remorse

She pondered.


…


Looking into the far far-away
A space limitless
A place with no ghosts
But, I dreamt

In a shuttle of no ghosts
Words, floating in space
In weightless-ness
In feelings

Civilizations
Revolutions
Mi Ultimo Adios
Left on earth with ghosts

Looking into the emptiness
Hellos in such a Hell-So distance
Yet, I think for where I go
A place with no ghosts


....


She
was
transcended

There I was, observing finds
Catching her, the angle's first deer smile
The coffee spill and her scent, smelt
The sketch neither black, nor white
Reflected in the window my beard and
“ if you mind switching to the other side?”


.....


I read your face, prying into the colors hidden behind.
Did I mention your pupils the goddess gate I find
The halos to the canvas of heart inside

Little did I realize
I’d just met you in the sky
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（在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

[Lake]

又读博弈新鲜出笼大作。

1 题目“I met you in the sky ” 已然吸眼球。
一些诗动不动就是“无题”，殊不知诗歌这么短小的文学体裁，题目不加以利用，纯属浪费。 个见。
“I met you in the sky ”， 令人遐思，遇上空姐了？空中仙遇？。。。

2 stanza 之间用了 dot ,给人以想象的空间，因为初看还以为是 省略号，细看才知道是用来分段的。

3 you, I, she 我读起来有些混乱，不过近来读诗也学乖了 ，我可以是我，也可以是你，也可以是他，随读者去想吧。不过读书那阵，让老师修理过，还专门送我一本关于正确使用 persona的语法书。我想现在应该是过时了。

4 “You in the shade return to the tail of my core "
I am not familiar with "the tail of my core".

5 "Catching her, the angle's first deer smile "
I wonder what "a deer smile" would be.


A romantic write.
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

[kokho]

This is one of your more conventional work.

But I like it very much!!!

It is very English in it expression.



.
I agreed with Lake, Mark is in Romantic mood )
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