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pi
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2007-06-10 18:19:02    fābiǎozhùtí: pi yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

没料想还有这么多错漏
我从前学的是数学,所以我还是喜欢用your was.我把纠正稿贴在后面,你再看看
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2007-06-10 18:23:57    fābiǎozhùtí: 纠错 yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

Pi
by huangjuan
I wonder how many decimal places π has exacted behind point
How odd the number formation is
How many Mathetician accounted break the number from one to nine
Zhangheng,Zuchongzhi
How could they find the first route from cloud hill and fog sea
Whether have no end or not
As if the oaths of love
Along--go down forever

Even computer cann't let me see the farthest
Limit lengthening
How much time seeking knowledge has exhausted
And how many fans would be curious for you
Who would you select
To discover you more or less

In my dream,you was my a conjugal felicity what have gone
Because of first love
You unaveielably become the focus in my dream
Go ahead forever
Your progress is my always desire
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2007-06-10 18:39:14    fābiǎozhùtí: 纠错 yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

还忘了一个unavoidably
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2007-06-10 18:50:36    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

first love

一般用:

my first love
or
the first love

or my first-time love
...

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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2007-06-10 21:02:59    fābiǎozhùtí: 回复 yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

就这样吧
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tièzǐfābiǎoyú: 2007-06-25 05:51:46    fābiǎozhùtí: yǐnyòngbìnghuífù

中文的痕迹还很明显~~
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