jemmy
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 发表于: 2007-06-10 18:19:02 发表主题: pi |
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没料想还有这么多错漏
我从前学的是数学,所以我还是喜欢用your was.我把纠正稿贴在后面,你再看看 |
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jemmy
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| 发表于: 2007-06-10 18:23:57 发表主题: 纠错 |
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Pi
by huangjuan
I wonder how many decimal places π has exacted behind point
How odd the number formation is
How many Mathetician accounted break the number from one to nine
Zhangheng,Zuchongzhi
How could they find the first route from cloud hill and fog sea
Whether have no end or not
As if the oaths of love
Along--go down forever
Even computer cann't let me see the farthest
Limit lengthening
How much time seeking knowledge has exhausted
And how many fans would be curious for you
Who would you select
To discover you more or less
In my dream,you was my a conjugal felicity what have gone
Because of first love
You unaveielably become the focus in my dream
Go ahead forever
Your progress is my always desire |
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jemmy
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| 发表于: 2007-06-10 18:39:14 发表主题: 纠错 |
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| 还忘了一个unavoidably |
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| 发表于: 2007-06-10 18:50:36 发表主题: |
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first love
一般用：
my first love
or
the first love
or my first-time love
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jemmy
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| 发表于: 2007-06-10 21:02:59 发表主题: 回复 |
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| 就这样吧 |
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kino
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| 发表于: 2007-06-25 05:51:46 发表主题: |
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| 中文的痕迹还很明显~~ |
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