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《圍巾》

維子
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Posted: 2007-06-01 12:47:38 Post subject: 《圍巾》

《圍巾》它的名字跟秋季一樣的浪漫最適合今天圍上醇厚欲滴的節日裡第一次相遇溫暖一個溫馨的驛站並成了心的柵欄柔軟的手正在傳播花的氣息讓橙紅的擁抱纏繞著彼此的衣襟當第一聲風起我便如奔騰的俊馬不斷躍過山野河流圍住那朵藍色的幽雅唇齒之間的花語今晚一起回家決不會讓灰色的夜洗去顏色

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-06-01 12:48:55 Post subject:

當第一聲風起我便如奔騰的俊馬不斷躍過山野河流圍住那朵藍色的幽雅很雅致 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-01 13:06:26 Post subject:

是的：決不會讓灰色的夜洗去顏色 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

金金
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Posted: 2007-06-01 20:36:22 Post subject:

一段情谊 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

維子
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Posted: 2007-06-15 22:40:14 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

當第一聲風起
我便如奔騰的俊馬
不斷躍過山野河流
圍住那朵藍色的幽雅

很雅致

謝謝版主提讀!遙握!

維子
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Posted: 2007-06-15 22:41:29 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

是的：

決不會讓灰色的夜
洗去顏色

問好少君兄弟!遙握!

維子
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Posted: 2007-06-15 22:43:07 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

一段情谊

永遠的圍巾。。。
謝謝金金提讀!遙握!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-06-17 09:00:26 Post subject:

温暖的围巾维系一段感情~

花紫丹
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Posted: 2007-06-20 17:38:34 Post subject:

一条围巾写得如此深情,好诗.

金金
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Posted: 2007-06-22 19:31:38 Post subject:

好诗再提！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

木易沉香
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Posted: 2007-06-23 02:50:50 Post subject:

唇齒之間的花語今晚一起回家決不會讓灰色的夜洗去顏色温馨浪漫问好：）

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