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六月的麦田
天淡云闲
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 06:47:01    Post subject: 六月的麦田 Reply with quote

六月的麦田
文/天淡云闲

六月,风
说着情话
抚过丰满的麦田
麦穗打开羞涩
于农民上扬的语调里
收获 一镰之缘



我激情的手指
播响季节的琴弦
抑 扬 顿 挫中
解读岁月的漂染


如今,麦田沉甸甸
我留下一首虚空的诗
坐回窗前
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 07:05:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

我激情的手指
播响季节的琴弦
抑 扬 顿 挫中
解读岁月的漂染

暗扣写诗
倒是很自然
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 14:31:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

如今,麦田沉甸甸
我留下一首虚空的诗
坐回窗前

谁家风筝吹断线,落在画堂西。

你的窗子面向麦田,麦芒痒痒地爬上窗台——
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 17:33:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

后一节较好,前面有些淡了,问候天闲云淡诗人!! Smile
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天淡云闲
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 00:22:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
我激情的手指
播响季节的琴弦
抑 扬 顿 挫中
解读岁月的漂染

暗扣写诗
倒是很自然


问候和平!谢你鼓励
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天淡云闲
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 01:08:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
如今,麦田沉甸甸
我留下一首虚空的诗
坐回窗前

谁家风筝吹断线,落在画堂西。

你的窗子面向麦田,麦芒痒痒地爬上窗台——


问好朋友。谢提读
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天淡云闲
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 01:09:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
后一节较好,前面有些淡了,问候天闲云淡诗人!! Smile

感谢朋友直言。问好。
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 03:39:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

情感饱满,娴熟的语言.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 08:06:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

六月该是收获的季节了,问好云闲,状态不错哦~
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天淡云闲
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PostPosted: 2007-06-11 19:40:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
情感饱满,娴熟的语言.


问好福治!鼓励的同时别忘指点
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天淡云闲
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PostPosted: 2007-06-11 20:01:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
六月该是收获的季节了,问好云闲,状态不错哦~


谢明月提读。问好!
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燕庄生铁
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PostPosted: 2007-06-11 23:13:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

自然。问好
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