非马 秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 907 Location: 芝加哥 非马Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-03 03:24:24 Post subject: 又一个芝加哥蝉季 |
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又一个芝加哥蝉季
不容你有片刻的怀疑
上帝造耳朵
就是为了听这一场
热烈精彩的生命大辩论
黑暗土中十七年孵化的漫漫孤寂
天日下短短几天却无止无尽的欣喜
孤寂孤寂孤寂
欣喜欣喜欣喜
寂─喜─寂──
叽─────────── _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界>
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-03 06:20:55 Post subject: |
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上帝造耳朵
就是为了听这一场
热烈精彩的生命大辩论
有意味~问好非马先生!  |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
Posted: 2007-06-03 06:31:48 Post subject: |
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孤寂孤寂孤寂
欣喜欣喜欣喜
寂─喜─寂──
叽───────────
寓意深刻,趣味无穷
精彩 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
hepingdaoCollection |
Posted: 2007-06-03 07:49:46 Post subject: |
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能读出先生
处世为人淡雅的心态
 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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非马 秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 907 Location: 芝加哥 非马Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-03 07:51:58 Post subject: |
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谢谢半溪明月及和平岛的阅评。现在正是芝加哥的蝉季,今早在半睡眠状态下写成了这首诗,趁蝉声未绝贴出来同大家共享。 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界>
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一地雪 童生
Joined: 14 May 2007 Posts: 38
一地雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-03 19:17:46 Post subject: |
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孤寂与欣喜碰撞~`~ _________________ 十个数字一笔债
我的博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/yidixue |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-03 20:01:34 Post subject: |
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蝉鸣常给人以联想...... |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-04 13:12:29 Post subject: |
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唧唧复唧唧
木兰当户织
当窗理云鬓
对镜贴花黄
美—— _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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非马 秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 907 Location: 芝加哥 非马Collection |
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黑雨滴 秀才
Joined: 11 Jun 2007 Posts: 144
黑雨滴Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-11 22:01:07 Post subject: |
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17年,苦啊 _________________ 个人主页:http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang |
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燕庄生铁 秀才
Joined: 06 May 2007 Posts: 116
燕庄生铁Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-11 23:05:15 Post subject: |
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再读。为非马先生高超的短诗艺术折服。 |
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William Zhou周道模 探花
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 3950 Location: 中国四川广汉 William Zhou周道模Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-17 16:19:42 Post subject: |
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我也写过蝉,不久会挂在“西方文学”栏目上,请非马先生和诗友们批评。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模 |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
迪拜Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-18 22:47:46 Post subject: |
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前面,写的很朴实,很真实,
后面的,稍微...... |
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冯六一 童生
Joined: 16 Aug 2007 Posts: 18 Location: 湖南岳阳 冯六一Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-19 19:05:38 Post subject: |
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非马先生的诗,我读过很多,短小而意味深长,品之如茶.赏之如画.既有古典的意境,又有现代的语意.我很喜欢. _________________ 临水人洁 近荷心香 |
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非马 秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 907 Location: 芝加哥 非马Collection |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-08-19 21:40:02 Post subject: |
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漫长的孤寂换取短暂的欣喜,值还是不值?生命的思考。。。 |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
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非马 秀才
Joined: 22 Jun 2006 Posts: 907 Location: 芝加哥 非马Collection |
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