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你相信月光--给六月六日

ZY
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Posted: 2007-06-07 18:03:58 Post subject: 你相信月光--给六月六日

你相信月光，和狗猫，不太；水声尤其爱情是一面说谎的石壁有些哨兵背对结苔的缝隙。你相信坠楼的石钟乳一封信尤其可以折成纸船、或是团扇你相信火熏的木雕、冰糖和菊花茶吉他，不太；围巾尤其记忆是一道薄脸皮的壕沟有些围城的人止步水边。你相信回音里的马蹄一串项链可以无头、或许无尾 6/6/2007 _________________ 陌生人遺落的足印們已經靜坐良久

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Posted: 2007-06-07 19:52:27 Post subject:

很有情趣. 不太;何解?

ZY
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Posted: 2007-06-08 03:47:09 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

很有情趣.
不太;何解? Embarassed

二次大战，诺曼地登陆之役史六月六日断肠时.记得多年前有电影(好像是 Susan Heywood 主演的)叙述战时情侣分离的故事.

这只是小情诗一首,您读出情趣即可.情人间体己话,我在断句与省略上模拟.兼也思索爱情与记忆的事.

问好了.
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上城
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Posted: 2007-06-09 10:22:36 Post subject:

ZY wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

很有情趣.
不太;何解? Embarassed

二次大战，诺曼地登陆之役史六月六日断肠时.记得多年前有电影(好像是 Susan Heywood 主演的)叙述战时情侣分离的故事.

这只是小情诗一首,您读出情趣即可.情人间体己话,我在断句与省略上模拟.兼也思索爱情与记忆的事.

问好了.

要不是诗人点破，怎么能想到此多意蕴／
每人的经验经历不同（譬如六月六日断肠时），
对诗的感受理解不同，
只有待情景的呼唤了．不过汉诗重意连，汉语写
现代诗往往多义朦胧之处．一个印象，一个感受，
读诗所得往往仅此．一个词语，一个断片，令人玩索．　　　　　　　　　

我也只是好读诗，不求甚解．所以学问难得长进．　　
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每个诗人都很重要

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-09 13:20:42 Post subject:

诗不错。至于给不给六月六日没什么关系。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-06-11 00:24:05 Post subject:

爱情是一面说谎的石壁

ZY
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Posted: 2007-06-11 04:54:57 Post subject:

问好伤城，韩兄和赵兄。 _________________ 陌生人遺落的足印們已經靜坐良久

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