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观《诗剧·哲学弥撒曲》献诗

鹤雨
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Posted: 2006-10-01 01:06:34 Post subject: 观《诗剧·哲学弥撒曲》献诗

观《诗剧·哲学弥撒曲》献诗（仅以此诗献上，祝贺上海首场诗剧成功表演）泰山坏乎梁柱摧乎哲人萎乎 ——孔子临终献诗夜,着一袭黑衣,舞一袖神秘你一生与黑色抗争,探询夜的秘密，最终又回归到黑白昼，巨灯开关被神圣的手按下人类在瞬间丧失了看，只有那些朝圣的心灵洞开了听思想光照，激情吟唱生命舞台—— 开始释放黑色抒情我选择了随意坐下，你轻易将我捉住，提起心砰动，又在瞬间安静下来，以虔诚姿势打坐远离了地表，远离了我—— 舞台，灯光哲学家，形迹诡异者，合唱队吟着哲诗进入隐秘你委身于面具痛苦，损伤，寻找，希望，播送，继续上路—— 一头扎进了更深的黑并试图将它揭穿一切刚刚结束一切又重新开始行为诡异者，别这么大声叫喊当灯光再次打到我的脸上你所看到的，泪水不属于我…… 2006-9-10 于上海 _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

和平岛
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Posted: 2006-10-01 08:33:21 Post subject:

祝贺上海首场诗剧成功表演语言生动, 如临其境 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

鹤雨
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Posted: 2006-10-01 21:25:16 Post subject: 谢谢和平岛兄关注评读!

祝兄节日快乐!合家欢乐! _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

左岸
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Posted: 2006-10-13 15:36:10 Post subject:

戏剧与诗一样成功，对这样的谢幕报以掌声，问好鹤雨。 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

鹤雨
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Posted: 2006-10-16 01:47:07 Post subject: 谢左岸兄弟抬爱!

诗歌方面还得向你们多学习!握手! _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

维鹿延
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Posted: 2006-10-16 07:39:30 Post subject:

诗中更多的是“你”，而－－我选择了随意坐下－－坐下是一种人生姿态，是一种面对“你”的姿态，是一种个人在某种现实中（诗中主观与客观融合在历史诗剧的现实中）的姿态。写得比较“你”，而我很随意。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

孙慧峰
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Posted: 2006-10-18 02:47:47 Post subject:

我选择了随意坐下，你轻易将我捉住，提起心砰动，又在瞬间安静下来，以虔诚姿势打坐远离了地表，远离了我—— 这节写的好~

鹤雨
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Posted: 2006-10-19 23:57:30 Post subject: 谢谢楼上二位兄弟

关注抬爱!握手!向你们问好! _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

moonlight
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Posted: 2008-01-01 03:45:15 Post subject:

飞雪春风又一度, 新朋老友何日归? 遥祝新年快乐

了因大兄
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Posted: 2008-01-02 02:14:32 Post subject:

前三节更自然些.想像也辽阔些.问好! _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-02 11:23:16 Post subject:

呵呵，白水在翻家底哈~相信今年许多朋友都会回归~

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