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这世界我将--寄远
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 04:13:07    Post subject: 这世界我将--寄远 Reply with quote

这世界我将保留
在许多角落里衬了碎瓣的宁静
我相信不去走的小道对面
你可以拼图自己
用断裂一地的镜片
模拟初始的心

我的歌若是就含在舌底
若是纠缠一些不清的丝绪
呵这世界我将
保留像只回旋的蜘蛛
在一个固执的角落
悬挂粘稠的冷清

明日我将等候一串风信子的落瓣
为她们寻找殉葬的玉环
为一些哭声寻找
两片自持的嘴唇
为一些老去且风湿的灰尘
掩埋跌落桌面的撞击声

请继续掩耳、掩著
已经不再惊呼的眼睛
你不需理睬那只静静蹲坐的世界
和一只季节小跑时摇著的尾巴
以及鼻尖上仰望的湿润
以及颈圈上多余的铃声

4/24/2007
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 06:00:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

有些很好的诗句和意境, 值得细品的诗歌.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 07:35:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢.
问好白水.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-25 23:22:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

碎瓣,蜘蛛,嘴唇,眼睛

问好ZY
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PostPosted: 2007-05-26 00:12:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

连词用得太麻烦,注意下改进。
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