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真相--in couplets unrhymed

ZY
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Posted: 2007-05-23 04:44:56 Post subject: 真相--in couplets unrhymed

经常与一好人争执所谓宇宙、所谓真相我们不同意各自飞翔的方式房事，则无所谓因为批评他，对鸽子们太过纵容我就不断地收到，退回的信和没用的羽毛查无此人。暮春三月我必须渡河，才能买得到善良的邮票他宣布，怀孕的妻子学会了裁缝便开始在襟上插花，在鞋子上抹油我们打赌洪汛的来速，雨季的第十日我们仍不同意，长过第九日，有多少？两根电线杆对立，在河堤上如果是个低温的夜，我将提议爬杆或者是站在洪水中的定力，鸽子们都爱绕圈子看热闹我们的妻子在堤上摇头讪笑，她们懂的我们不。至于比较体温之高那件事，在水深及胸时我们同意，不若比较血压之低最后一次我，与一好人讨论宇宙真相等等洪水淹没口和舌时，我记得草长，和没去过的江南 5/23/2007 _________________ 陌生人遺落的足印們已經靜坐良久

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Posted: 2007-05-23 04:47:50 Post subject:

格调别具特色, 耐品

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Posted: 2007-05-23 10:34:46 Post subject:

问好ZY _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

ZY
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Posted: 2007-05-23 13:37:29 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

格调别具特色, 耐品

多谢了.白水兄别来无恙.
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Posted: 2007-05-23 13:38:04 Post subject:

也问好伤城. _________________ 陌生人遺落的足印們已經靜坐良久

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Posted: 2007-05-23 13:48:09 Post subject:

独特！值得品味！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-05-23 13:49:38 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

独特！值得品味！

多谢了.
问好.
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Posted: 2007-05-23 13:51:19 Post subject:

很好！问候ZY！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-05-23 13:54:59 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

很好！问候ZY！！！

多谢,也问好杨兄.
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