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球赛
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PostPosted: 2015-07-17 07:24:40    Post subject: 球赛 Reply with quote
球赛
----赠诗社群友

大地一球场，
球队分两方。
经纬划边界，
群山来观赏。
太阳是排球，
月亮作乒乓。
东边发球，旭日东升飞天际，
西边拦网，夕阳西下接球忙。
绿草场上微风动，
飘然紫气在东方。
无悔积分归一零，
林荫大道连边疆。
同悲共喜，
胜负分享。
但愿球赛无终时，
日升月落天地长。
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PostPosted: 2015-07-17 07:57:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
太阳是排球，
月亮作乒乓。


的確，好象想！
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PostPosted: 2015-07-17 13:04:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
博弈 wrote:
qinghongh wrote:
太阳是排球，
月亮作乒乓。


的確，好象想！


谢谢！
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PostPosted: 2015-07-17 18:18:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
构想已经出来了
语言上可以更生活化

有进步
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PostPosted: 2015-07-18 02:01:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
构想已经出来了
语言上可以更生活化

有进步


谢谢岛兄！我很少写新诗，还有待多学习。
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PostPosted: 2015-07-18 04:18:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
但愿人间和平，球赛开场。
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PostPosted: 2015-07-18 05:28:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
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但愿人间和平，球赛开场。


谢谢！
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PostPosted: 2015-07-18 18:15:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
这首诗气场强大，胸怀宽广。
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