小尚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2007 Posts: 101
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Posted: 2015-07-16 16:27:50 Post subject: 昭君怨 |
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昭君怨
窗外敌声不断,
扰我一双困眼。
欲语意阑珊,
煮三餐。
阴雨天空灰暗,
人斗暑温疲倦。
无力硬撑帆,
累人间。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2015-07-17 02:36:48 Post subject: |
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问候朋友!
敌声的”敌“,用的重了。毕竟只是吵杂而已哦。 |
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小尚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2007 Posts: 101
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Posted: 2015-07-17 15:03:23 Post subject: |
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不知哪里出鬼了老自动重复发帖 |
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小尚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2007 Posts: 101
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Posted: 2015-07-17 15:03:52 Post subject: |
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不一定是院里的声音,不知从哪儿进来了许多外人在骚扰。 |
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我为诗歌狂 童生

Joined: 27 Jun 2015 Posts: 42 Location: Canada 我为诗歌狂Collection |
Posted: 2015-08-05 15:45:25 Post subject: |
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外人也称不上敌人吧。。。这词怎么看着这么灰色啊。 |
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