小尚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2007
Posts: 101
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 Posted: 2015-07-16 16:27:50 Post subject: 昭君怨 |
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昭君怨
窗外敌声不断，
扰我一双困眼。
欲语意阑珊，
煮三餐。
阴雨天空灰暗，
人斗暑温疲倦。
无力硬撑帆，
累人间。 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2015-07-17 02:36:48 Post subject: |
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问候朋友！
敌声的”敌“，用的重了。毕竟只是吵杂而已哦。 |
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小尚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2007
Posts: 101
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| Posted: 2015-07-17 15:03:23 Post subject: |
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| 不知哪里出鬼了老自动重复发帖 |
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小尚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2007
Posts: 101
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| Posted: 2015-07-17 15:03:52 Post subject: |
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| 不一定是院里的声音，不知从哪儿进来了许多外人在骚扰。 |
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我为诗歌狂
童生
Joined: 27 Jun 2015
Posts: 42
Location: Canada
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| Posted: 2015-08-05 15:45:25 Post subject: |
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| 外人也称不上敌人吧。。。这词怎么看着这么灰色啊。 |
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