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食欲之满足（一）

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-05-01 17:59:09 Post subject: 食欲之满足（一）

食欲之满足（一）为着一再逃避，单薄的香椿树已遁入了远空无风的春天，它因俯瞰到下界的人类而发出惊鸟般的哀鸣但我无法，我毕竟是食草的百姓我抑制不住幸福的欲望我要让一株俺家的树来献身了危耸的房顶，叠上我的身高，以及斜横的木杆和铁钩，咔嚓—— 一大股手臂劈面而下，我瞥见那断骨竟然有人一样的血红 2007-4-22 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Posted: 2007-05-01 18:08:05 Post subject:

冲浪, 很高兴又读到你的诗.

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-05-01 18:55:00 Post subject:

那断骨竟然有人一样的血红 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-05-01 20:37:09 Post subject:

为着一再逃避，单薄的香椿树已遁入了远空无风的春天，它因俯瞰到下界的人类而发出惊鸟般的哀鸣含义深远~狼兄节日好!

冷水
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2007-05-01 22:52:24 Post subject:

喜欢你触及心灵态势 _________________ 越来越蠢

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-05-02 02:19:27 Post subject:

问好楼上的各位兄妹，好久没有写了，因为忙和惰。我以后会慢慢的写一点的。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2007-05-02 03:09:42 Post subject:

冷水 wrote:

喜欢你触及心灵态势

同感! 赞!
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孙继廷
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Posted: 2007-05-02 04:43:57 Post subject:

一大股手臂劈面而下，我瞥见那断骨竟然有人一样的血红让人心惊的体验！好诗！！！问好诗人！

博弈
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Posted: 2007-05-02 09:30:59 Post subject:

投注诗（projective poetry)则我字嫌多了些。仍是好诗。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

上城
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Posted: 2007-05-02 10:23:56 Post subject:

欣赏带＂血＂字的诗．哈哈，欣赏＂食草的百姓＂有着＂噬血＂的嗜好． _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-05-02 18:40:37 Post subject:

让人战栗的诗句！好诗！问好冲浪兄。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-05-04 20:06:22 Post subject:

杨海军 wrote:

让人战栗的诗句！好诗！问好冲浪兄。

问好海军兄弟。
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ZY
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Posted: 2007-05-05 04:17:57 Post subject:

我毕竟是食草的百姓 *很有意思的一個隱喻. 問好. _________________ 陌生人遺落的足印們已經靜坐良久

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-05-06 19:03:43 Post subject:

又读到冲浪兄“寓言般”的短章了。问好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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