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五律 . 咏竹
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PostPosted: 2013-07-23 22:36:04    Post subject: 五律 . 咏竹 Reply with quote

五律 . 咏竹

司马从戎


挺拔刚直节,盘根连理情。
从来无悔意,自古有清名。
常拂民间泪,时呼疾苦声。
忽闻春雨至,婀娜向天行。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-24 06:24:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗言志
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PostPosted: 2013-07-24 10:07:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

旧作和诗友:

七绝 咏竹

青翠节高身自直,枝成墨画叶成诗。
迎风披雨精神在,饱受艰辛谁尽知?
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PostPosted: 2013-07-26 20:24:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
诗言志


谢谢先生雅顾。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-26 20:25:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
旧作和诗友:
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大作拜读,学习了。谢谢。
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游向高原的鱼
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PostPosted: 2013-07-27 23:18:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马从戎 wrote:
五律 . 咏竹
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读司马咏竹凑几句。

也趁青春发壮心,
欲将节节向苍旻。
不知何故斫我脚,
了断盘中怕来生。
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人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。
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司马从戎
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PostPosted: 2013-07-29 20:37:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

游向高原的鱼 wrote:
司马从戎 wrote:
五律 . 咏竹
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读司马咏竹凑几句。
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大作拜读,谢谢。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-30 06:13:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读各位大作,学习。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-30 20:31:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

司马从戎 wrote:
五律 . 咏竹
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起联妙,只是“拔”和“直”皆为入声,新旧声韵叠用了,供参考。
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PostPosted: 2013-08-01 21:59:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
司马从戎 wrote:
五律 . 咏竹
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起联妙,只是“拔”和“直”皆为入声,新旧声韵叠用了,供参考。


多谢先生指正。
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PostPosted: 2013-08-01 22:00:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊 wrote:
拜读各位大作,学习。


谢谢先生留墨。
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