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五律 . 咏竹

司马从戎
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Posted: 2013-07-23 22:36:04 Post subject: 五律 . 咏竹

五律 . 咏竹司马从戎挺拔刚直节，盘根连理情。从来无悔意，自古有清名。常拂民间泪，时呼疾苦声。忽闻春雨至，婀娜向天行。

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Posted: 2013-07-24 06:24:24 Post subject:

诗言志

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Posted: 2013-07-24 10:07:29 Post subject:

旧作和诗友：七绝咏竹青翠节高身自直，枝成墨画叶成诗。迎风披雨精神在，饱受艰辛谁尽知？

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Posted: 2013-07-26 20:24:06 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

诗言志

谢谢先生雅顾。

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Posted: 2013-07-26 20:25:13 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

旧作和诗友：
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大作拜读，学习了。谢谢。

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Posted: 2013-07-27 23:18:05 Post subject:

司马从戎 wrote:

五律 . 咏竹
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读司马咏竹凑几句。

也趁青春发壮心，
欲将节节向苍旻。
不知何故斫我脚，
了断盘中怕来生。
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司马从戎
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Posted: 2013-07-29 20:37:01 Post subject:

游向高原的鱼 wrote:

司马从戎 wrote:

五律 . 咏竹
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读司马咏竹凑几句。
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大作拜读，谢谢。

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Posted: 2013-07-30 06:13:38 Post subject:

拜读各位大作，学习。

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Posted: 2013-07-30 20:31:54 Post subject:

司马从戎 wrote:

五律 . 咏竹
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起联妙，只是“拔”和“直”皆为入声，新旧声韵叠用了，供参考。

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Posted: 2013-08-01 21:59:11 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

司马从戎 wrote:

五律 . 咏竹
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起联妙，只是“拔”和“直”皆为入声，新旧声韵叠用了，供参考。

多谢先生指正。

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Posted: 2013-08-01 22:00:36 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

拜读各位大作，学习。

谢谢先生留墨。

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