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七绝 追赶夕阳
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PostPosted: 2013-05-26 05:02:52    Post subject: 七绝 追赶夕阳 Reply with quote
七绝 追赶夕阳

小女提议傍晚到户外摄影，老父从谏如流，
拿着相机，迳出门外，去追赶稍纵即逝的夕阳

光转緑杨驱老腿
影移红杏敢迟疑
晚霞似錦留记忆
追赶夕阳景物奇
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PostPosted: 2013-05-26 23:47:50    Post subject: Reply with quote
活跃身心摄彩霞，追赶夕阳留晚照 - 积极人生！
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2013-05-27 05:32:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
夕阳美景，父女情深。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-28 06:21:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢白云兄，庆宏赏阅和鼓励。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-28 20:22:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
从题目看，应该有两层意思：其一，写实；其二，暗喻。

学习。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-29 23:11:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢笑聊兄解读题目，正是本意。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-29 23:11:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢笑聊兄解读题目，正是本意。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-08 09:04:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
“追赶夕阳景物奇”
奇在“追赶”，赞。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-08 10:36:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢一无赏阅！
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