黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-05-26 05:02:52 Post subject: 七绝 追赶夕阳 |
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七绝 追赶夕阳
小女提议傍晚到户外摄影,老父从谏如流,
拿着相机,迳出门外,去追赶稍纵即逝的夕阳
光转緑杨驱老腿
影移红杏敢迟疑
晚霞似錦留记忆
追赶夕阳景物奇 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2013-05-26 23:47:50 Post subject: |
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活跃身心摄彩霞,追赶夕阳留晚照 - 积极人生! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2013-05-27 05:32:14 Post subject: |
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夕阳美景,父女情深。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-05-28 06:21:24 Post subject: |
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谢白云兄,庆宏赏阅和鼓励。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-05-28 20:22:10 Post subject: |
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从题目看,应该有两层意思:其一,写实;其二,暗喻。
学习。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-05-29 23:11:01 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑聊兄解读题目,正是本意。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-05-29 23:11:19 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑聊兄解读题目,正是本意。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-06-08 10:36:49 Post subject: |
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谢一无赏阅! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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