【汉诗英译】第一站:耶稣被判死刑（请指点）

[William Zhou周道模]

第一站:耶稣被判死刑
The First Stop: Jesus Was Sentenced to Death

伊甸 作 周道模 译

谁是有罪的?
是把自己的血当作红酒
把自己的肉当作面包献给人类的那个人
还是高高在上的总督
自私而又残忍的祭司和长老?
Who was guilty?
Was the person who gave his blood as wine
and his flesh as bread to mankind?
Or the highest Governor
Or the selfish and brute priest?

躲在人群中,三次说不认识他的
这个被恐惧夺走骨头的人是你吗?
Hiding in the crowd,was it you who said three times that not knowing him?
Were you the person whose bones were taken away by fear?

上帝早已原谅了你的怯懦
但上帝无法决定
该不该原谅那些高喊“杀死他”的围观者
God forgave your unmanliness long ago
But God could not decide
whether He should forgive those onlookers shouting “kill him”

该不该原谅
1968年在北京工人体育场
高喊“枪毙反革命分子”的十万群众？
Whether we should forgive
the thousands of people shouting “shoot the counterrevolutionary”
in Beijing Workers’ Stadium in 1968



2013-3-2 译
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[SLIU]

翻译很多时候是再创造。。

[William Zhou周道模]

[SLIU]

[白水]

You are a nice man. It is too hard to translate others' poem from Chinese to English

[William Zhou周道模]

[William Zhou周道模]

第二段可以改动一下结构！谢谢指点。
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[William Zhou周道模]

[白水]

It is not just for you, it is for everyone. we are not the intestinal worm in others' intestine

[李庆贺]

凑个热闹，学习！

[William Zhou周道模]

[wenquote="李庆贺"]凑个热闹，学习！[/quote]

问个春好，谢谢！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

[Lake]

I've been trying to draw the connection between Jesus and the thousands of people shouting “shoot the counterrevolutionary”
in Beijing Workers’ Stadium in 1968.
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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins