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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 04:08:56    Post subject: 远轮之《别》 Reply with quote

远轮之《别》

不必了。不是每一条船都会出海
虽然无数次期盼,期盼
与你共济同舟。
海面的风吹皱生死与诱惑
我们不得不道别,就像嬉戏港湾的鱼
挥挥手,便相忘于江湖。

记忆
是那些鱼跃鸢飞的落叶,那些缠绵缱绻的水草
千丝万缕羁绊的船舷
断开锚链
往西,谁在击节而歌?金蛇玉龙揽日月而起舞
赤兔血马逐海浪而奔腾
你说取道向北便是新居了,彼岸没有秦时明月
回眸关山,霸柳风雪别过一首小诗

日子,原本就是平平淡淡的日子
拧干云中的水珠,虹桥便会悄然逝去
一日三餐,小屋,庭院
江南雨巷的莲香从瓦罐里溢出了,
袅袅炊烟 。人间的烟火又一次弥漫晚冬霏雪
她不再是龙宫的女子
你瞧,那挥别的手多像一尾出逃的鱼儿,从键盘
悄悄滑过
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 05:48:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

相濡以沫,
不如相忘于江湖。
一路向西,
演绎多少悲欢离合。
挥手之间,
是永远离别的解读,
还是生死相许的祝福?
是宁愿难得清醒的期盼,
还是难得糊涂的糊涂?
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 09:45:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

拧干云中的水珠,虹桥便会悄然逝去
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 10:00:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

往西,谁在击节而歌?金蛇玉龙揽日月而起舞
赤兔血马逐海浪而奔腾
你说取道向北便是新居了,彼岸没有秦时明月
回眸关山,霸柳风雪别过一首小诗

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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 10:36:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
相濡以沫,
不如相忘于江湖。
一路向西,
演绎多少悲欢离合。
挥手之间,
是永远离别的解读,
还是生死相许的祝福?
是宁愿难得清醒的期盼,
还是难得糊涂的糊涂?
...


谢谢你,人有时的确需要糊涂点 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 10:37:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
拧干云中的水珠,虹桥便会悄然逝去


虹桥不过是个影像 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 10:39:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
往西,谁在击节而歌?金蛇玉龙揽日月而起舞
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谢谢老师鼓励,问好 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 12:07:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

小诗很美。。人生别多聚少,珍惜相聚的时光。。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 19:29:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意境,有感觉,欣赏,学习,问好.
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PostPosted: 2013-03-03 22:45:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

看到“回眸关山,霸柳风雪别”,想到我的老家蓝田,我是在霸河边长大的。
楼主可是乡党?
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PostPosted: 2013-03-04 00:57:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

sliu6 wrote:
小诗很美。。人生别多聚少,珍惜相聚的时光。。


谢谢466 Wink 的确该珍惜
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PostPosted: 2013-03-04 00:58:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
有意境,有感觉,欣赏,学习,问好.
问好
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PostPosted: 2013-03-04 01:10:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

钱晓强 wrote:
看到“回眸关山,霸柳风雪别”,想到我的老家蓝田,我是在霸河边长大的。
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问好乡当,在那儿生活过。主要是借古诗词写意吧
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PostPosted: 2013-03-04 06:40:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

袅袅炊烟 。人间的烟火又一次弥漫晚冬的厨房
它不再是龙宫的游子
你闻,那诱人的香味是发自一尾蒸熟的鱼儿,从菜盘
悄悄透出
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PostPosted: 2013-03-04 14:27:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

俺以为,相忘于江湖,是一种很高的境界。你说呢?
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PostPosted: 2013-03-04 15:42:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

如若相濡以沫了,我想就难相忘于江湖。人,最不容易忘的苦难时期的朋友,苦难还是朋友,应当是真朋友。所以,“相忘于江湖”,不过是更多的无奈、伤感和祝愿。
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PostPosted: 2013-03-05 07:29:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习这种境界
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PostPosted: 2013-03-06 08:28:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:

袅袅炊烟 。人间的烟火又一次弥漫晚冬的厨房
它不再是龙宫的游子
你闻,那诱人的香味是发自一尾蒸熟的鱼儿,从菜盘
悄悄透出
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秋叶,被你这么一写让人忍俊不禁 Laughing
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霜木凌风 wrote:
俺以为,相忘于江湖,是一种很高的境界。你说呢?

说的是,看来你悟透了庄子。我总是放不开 Embarassed 看来该剪头发才是 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2013-03-06 08:43:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
如若相濡以沫了,我想就难相忘于江湖。人,最不容易忘的苦难时期的朋友,苦难还是朋友,应当是真朋友。所以,“相忘于江湖”,不过是更多的无奈、伤感和祝愿。


谢谢冲浪,每个人心底都藏有值得永远珍惜的友情
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