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白水
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Posted: 2013-03-03 04:08:56 Post subject: 远轮之《别》

远轮之《别》不必了。不是每一条船都会出海虽然无数次期盼，期盼与你共济同舟。海面的风吹皱生死与诱惑我们不得不道别，就像嬉戏港湾的鱼挥挥手，便相忘于江湖。记忆是那些鱼跃鸢飞的落叶，那些缠绵缱绻的水草千丝万缕羁绊的船舷断开锚链往西，谁在击节而歌？金蛇玉龙揽日月而起舞赤兔血马逐海浪而奔腾你说取道向北便是新居了，彼岸没有秦时明月回眸关山，霸柳风雪别过一首小诗日子，原本就是平平淡淡的日子拧干云中的水珠，虹桥便会悄然逝去一日三餐，小屋，庭院江南雨巷的莲香从瓦罐里溢出了，袅袅炊烟。人间的烟火又一次弥漫晚冬霏雪她不再是龙宫的女子你瞧，那挥别的手多像一尾出逃的鱼儿，从键盘悄悄滑过

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Posted: 2013-03-03 05:48:43 Post subject:

相濡以沫，不如相忘于江湖。一路向西，演绎多少悲欢离合。挥手之间，是永远离别的解读，还是生死相许的祝福？是宁愿难得清醒的期盼，还是难得糊涂的糊涂？

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Posted: 2013-03-03 09:45:30 Post subject:

拧干云中的水珠，虹桥便会悄然逝去 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2013-03-03 10:00:21 Post subject:

往西，谁在击节而歌？金蛇玉龙揽日月而起舞赤兔血马逐海浪而奔腾你说取道向北便是新居了，彼岸没有秦时明月回眸关山，霸柳风雪别过一首小诗 _欣赏！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-03-03 10:36:04 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

相濡以沫，
不如相忘于江湖。
一路向西，
演绎多少悲欢离合。
挥手之间，
是永远离别的解读，
还是生死相许的祝福？
是宁愿难得清醒的期盼，
还是难得糊涂的糊涂？
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谢谢你，人有时的确需要糊涂点 Very Happy

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Posted: 2013-03-03 10:37:43 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

拧干云中的水珠，虹桥便会悄然逝去

虹桥不过是个影像

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Posted: 2013-03-03 10:39:17 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

往西，谁在击节而歌？金蛇玉龙揽日月而起舞
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谢谢老师鼓励，问好

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Posted: 2013-03-03 12:07:59 Post subject:

小诗很美。。人生别多聚少，珍惜相聚的时光。。

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Posted: 2013-03-03 19:29:45 Post subject:

有意境,有感觉，欣赏，学习，问好. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2013-03-03 22:45:47 Post subject:

看到“回眸关山，霸柳风雪别”，想到我的老家蓝田，我是在霸河边长大的。楼主可是乡党？ _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2

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Posted: 2013-03-04 00:57:08 Post subject:

sliu6 wrote:

小诗很美。。人生别多聚少，珍惜相聚的时光。。

谢谢466

的确该珍惜

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Posted: 2013-03-04 00:58:38 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

有意境,有感觉，欣赏，学习，问好.

问好

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Posted: 2013-03-04 01:10:49 Post subject:

钱晓强 wrote:

看到“回眸关山，霸柳风雪别”，想到我的老家蓝田，我是在霸河边长大的。
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问好乡当，在那儿生活过。主要是借古诗词写意吧

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Posted: 2013-03-04 06:40:59 Post subject:

袅袅炊烟。人间的烟火又一次弥漫晚冬的厨房它不再是龙宫的游子你闻，那诱人的香味是发自一尾蒸熟的鱼儿，从菜盘悄悄透出

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Posted: 2013-03-04 14:27:39 Post subject:

俺以为，相忘于江湖，是一种很高的境界。你说呢？

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Posted: 2013-03-04 15:42:50 Post subject:

如若相濡以沫了，我想就难相忘于江湖。人，最不容易忘的苦难时期的朋友，苦难还是朋友，应当是真朋友。所以，“相忘于江湖”，不过是更多的无奈、伤感和祝愿。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2013-03-05 07:29:54 Post subject:

学习这种境界 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2013-03-06 08:28:36 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

袅袅炊烟。人间的烟火又一次弥漫晚冬的厨房
它不再是龙宫的游子
你闻，那诱人的香味是发自一尾蒸熟的鱼儿，从菜盘
悄悄透出
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秋叶，被你这么一写让人忍俊不禁 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-03-06 08:32:57 Post subject:

霜木凌风 wrote:

俺以为，相忘于江湖，是一种很高的境界。你说呢？

说的是，看来你悟透了庄子。我总是放不开 Embarassed

看来该剪头发才是

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Posted: 2013-03-06 08:43:28 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

如若相濡以沫了，我想就难相忘于江湖。人，最不容易忘的苦难时期的朋友，苦难还是朋友，应当是真朋友。所以，“相忘于江湖”，不过是更多的无奈、伤感和祝愿。

谢谢冲浪，每个人心底都藏有值得永远珍惜的友情

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