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				|  发表于: 2007-04-17 10:19:46    发表主题: American Zen by Ray McNiece HAIKU - 4 |   |  
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				| <> Ray McNiece 
 bare birch mountainside
 breath hovering over snow
 words never spoken
 
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				|  发表于: 2007-04-17 10:34:56    发表主题: |   |  
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				| I met Ray McNiece during the April session on "subTEXT" monthly literary gathering at the basement of Center National Library of Singapore, where
 he was the last and anchoring reciting poet of the night.
 
 This is an event organised by Shu Hoong, a respectable poet/writer
 in Singapore.
 
 These 2 works were extracted from a book - ISBN 0-933087-91-8
 which is supported by Ohio Arts Council;
 < American Zen, A Gathering of Poets >
 Edited with Introduction by Ray McNiece & Larry Smith
 Featuring Zen statements and works of 30 poets.
 
 Published by Bottom Dog Press, Huron, Ohio
 
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 These postings were with verbal understanding from Ray McNiece for
 The purpose of a review to be written by me.
 
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				| bare birch mountainside    《》a white timber breath hovering over snow   《》white foggy breath in winter over white snow
 words never spoken       《》the praise of whiteness was done !
 
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 Zen is about oneness with nature, and nothingness in expression !!!
 
 Ray shines on his choice of imageries and the tale-telling interactions amongst them.
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	  | bare birch mountainside    《》a white timber breath hovering over snow   《》white foggy breath in winter over white snow
 words never spoken       《》the praise of whiteness was done !
 
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 Zen is about oneness with nature, and nothingness in expression !!!
 
 Ray shines on his choice of imageries and the tale-telling interactions amongst them.
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 Good review.
 
 是啊, 雪是白的, 大自然是白的,呼出的气是白的,天人合一。还能说什么呢?要说的也是白的,白茫茫一片真干净!
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