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落葉

青洋
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Posted: 2012-10-03 02:01:17 Post subject: 落葉

落葉一張張筋脉裸露, 饱经风霜的手绿色血液正渐渐枯竭行走的鞋子们，带来沙尘暴于是你有了老年斑一阵风帮你翻身手心朝上问天 _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

hepingdao
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Posted: 2012-10-03 03:23:34 Post subject:

很形象化 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

青洋
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Posted: 2012-10-03 05:21:55 Post subject:

謝謝島主鼓勵。 _________________ 坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2012-10-03 10:36:11 Post subject:

问好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2012-10-04 01:15:03 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

问好。

也向您問好，謝謝來讀我的詩。
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坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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Posted: 2012-10-05 10:33:01 Post subject:

抓住了落叶的命脉，“手心朝上问天”有意思。

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Posted: 2012-10-07 08:14:38 Post subject:

风动 wrote:

抓住了落叶的命脉，“手心朝上
问天”有意思。

問天，落葉之悲憤在於這一問。
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坐在方舟中的無用之人天天射落日的倒影

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