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Battling its way
through twists and turns
the sky
traverses immense space and time
to meet
the sea
that ripples and surges forward
rain or shine
Eventually
they join paths
and merge
into
magnificence |
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vivid images
though twists and turns
though or through ?
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oh，a typo, thanks.. 
转个小故事：
有一天，天爱上了海. 可是空气阻隔了他们。天哭了，泪水落在海里。即使不能在一起，天也要把灵魂托付给海，从此海比天蓝。 |
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the poem maps to the story well
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Thanks hepingdao..
Tried to upload a picture but couldn't |
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Thanks hepingdao..
Tried to upload a picture but couldn't |
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| 好漂亮的图片，多谢~ |
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you are welcome
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The sea and sky, the sun and moon, the yin and yang...
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