叶英儿 秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 577 Location: 中国 叶英儿Collection |
Posted: 2012-07-13 07:32:12 Post subject: 鹤眠兮 |
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鹤眠兮
月亮 弯弯照在竹林兮
竹林丛中有鹤眠兮
风起 风起
群山环绕
有鹤眠兮
眠兮 眠兮
山风欲来
雨先下起
鹤眠兮
鹤眠兮
竹林清风细雨
淅淅沥沥
鹤惊醒
鹤惊醒
(浙江、叶英儿) |
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和平岛 举人

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 1277 Location: Victoria, Canada 和平岛Collection |
Posted: 2012-07-22 11:50:28 Post subject: |
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小时候老家确实有鹤绕竹而鸣
遥远的记忆了
问好叶英儿 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗 |
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叶英儿 秀才
Joined: 03 Jun 2006 Posts: 577 Location: 中国 叶英儿Collection |
Posted: 2012-08-17 15:24:06 Post subject: |
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谢谢和平岛先生。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2012-08-25 22:04:55 Post subject: |
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有点古风的味儿 |
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