| 叶英儿 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 03 Jun 2006
 Posts: 577
 Location: 中国
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				|  Posted: 2012-07-13 07:32:12    Post subject: 鹤眠兮 |   |  
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				| 鹤眠兮 月亮 弯弯照在竹林兮
 竹林丛中有鹤眠兮
 风起 风起
 群山环绕
 有鹤眠兮
 眠兮 眠兮
 山风欲来
 雨先下起
 鹤眠兮
 鹤眠兮
 竹林清风细雨
 淅淅沥沥
 鹤惊醒
 鹤惊醒
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		| 和平岛 举人
 
  
 Joined: 25 May 2006
 Posts: 1277
 Location: Victoria, Canada
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				|  Posted: 2012-07-22 11:50:28    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 小时候老家确实有鹤绕竹而鸣 
 遥远的记忆了
 
 问好叶英儿
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 写诗是为了写更好的诗
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		| 叶英儿 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 03 Jun 2006
 Posts: 577
 Location: 中国
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				|  Posted: 2012-08-17 15:24:06    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢和平岛先生。 |  | 
	
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
 Joined: 02 Oct 2006
 Posts: 14102
 Location: TORONTO
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				|  Posted: 2012-08-25 22:04:55    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 有点古风的味儿 |  | 
	
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