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五律忆登缙云山

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-03 15:35:49 Post subject: 五律忆登缙云山

五律忆登缙云山五十年前，余在重庆西南师范学院求学，毕业前夕，得暇，独步上缙云山，登最高峰狮子峰，以作告别游。光阴荏苒，亦难忘怀，因以记之。独上缙云山匆匆不计年丹楓荣陌上黄菊傲篱边古寺清钟远江楼朗月先狮峰云靉靉醉卧枕书眠 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-10-03 16:57:50 Post subject:

美哉缙云山！我求学时曾到重庆北碚实习，当年错过了登缙云山的机会，留下当年遗憾。但愿今后有朝一日能偿夙愿。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-03 17:49:13 Post subject:

庆宏，缙云山和北泉毕竟是我们曾经游学之地。有机会，当补偿一游的夙愿。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

淮南小山黄伟群
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Posted: 2011-10-03 21:29:14 Post subject: 回复黄洋界前辈

黄洋界 wrote:

五律忆登缙云山
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2002年8月三峡之旅曾游重庆北碚，所登狮子峰，原来是缙云山。还曾游温泉。问好前辈！
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Posted: 2011-10-04 02:16:12 Post subject:

黄老师的五律读来如同亲临，尤其欣赏中两联，那种古寺深幽、晨钟暮鼓；那种丹枫、黄菊；那种江楼早得月的情景历历在目。功力可见！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-04 07:05:25 Post subject:

谢谢淮南小山畅游故乡山水。谢谢笑聊兄赏评和鼓励。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-10-06 03:15:15 Post subject:

黄老师的“醉卧枕书眠”句，让我想起了一个网名——枕书然笛

冰清
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Posted: 2011-10-06 05:58:39 Post subject:

黄兄好律，尤喜中两联：一句一境界，点点润心田。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-06 07:05:33 Post subject:

謝海蛎子，冰清雅賞。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2011-10-10 06:06:43 Post subject:

步韵写意独步情深五十年丹楓黄菊傲篱边江楼古寺清钟上醉卧狮峰朗月间 _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

黄洋界
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Posted: 2011-10-10 13:50:30 Post subject:

南河君，将拙作凝练成七绝，更觉传神。谢谢！慨叹同样汉字之奇妙组合，可以另开新境，当然，还要看驾驭语言的能力如何。让我们共勉。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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