五绝 船帆（汉译英）

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五绝 船帆（汉译英）

破浪御风船，栖身浅水湾。
无缘临大海，空挂一桅帆。

An Empty Sail

A ship can drive winds,
and travel thousands of miles far away,
But she is blocked in a shallow bay.
Without opportunity on the sea,
An empty sail has no word to say.

新改：

A ship can drive winds,
and travel thousands of miles away,
But she is blocked in a shallow bay.
Without opportunity on the sea,
An empty sail has no word to say.

[William Zhou周道模]

far 是否可以不要？
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