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《从此你无法再忧伤》
杨海军
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PostPosted: 2011-03-13 05:25:07    Post subject: 《从此你无法再忧伤》 Reply with quote

《从此你无法再忧伤》

——致一位死去的因病失语的朋友



从此你无法再忧伤

心里那些话不用再说

那些歌儿也不必再唱

多少年了

它们像受了惊吓的鹿群

冲撞着你的身体

但现在全死在你的身体里了



从此你无法再忧伤

血液不流了,心里的灯灭了

躺在那里像一块干枯的木头

你的老母亲边哭边为你梳头

她要梳尽你的忧伤

梳尽藏在你体内所有的黄昏和落日

让你像风一样轻松上路



写完这首诗

我也不忧伤了

因为——

从此,我们再没有任何关系了
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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PostPosted: 2011-03-13 07:08:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得很实在,并紧扣题注
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2011-03-13 14:39:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢文星诗人!祝好
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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PostPosted: 2011-03-14 00:13:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

是的 。和忧伤一起故去。
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PostPosted: 2011-03-15 06:15:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢少君诗人!
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PostPosted: 2011-03-16 13:38:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

写完这首诗

我也不忧伤了

因为——

从此,我们再没有任何关系了
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2011-03-16 15:18:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

它们像受了惊吓的鹿群

冲撞着你的身体

但现在全死在你的身体里了


——整首诗哀而不伤,一种淡定远去的悲哀,情感真诚。
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