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				|  发表于: 2011-02-23 13:23:36    发表主题: Early Spring |   |  
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				| Early Spring 
 Little birds fly back, singing
 and  picking snowflakes from the tree
 The ice melts away,
 floating and chasing the wave in the river
 I stand near the window,
 waiting silently
 for the first thunder of spring
 and the raindrops to drip into my poems
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  发表于: 2011-02-25 16:51:24    发表主题: |   |  
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				| the raindrop to drip into my poems 
 Wonderful!
 
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		| 博弈 榜眼
 
 
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				|  发表于: 2011-02-25 17:41:57    发表主题: |   |  
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				| good. 
 raindrops maybe?
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		| Lake 举人
 
  
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				|  发表于: 2011-02-25 17:51:20    发表主题: |   |  
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				| and snowflakes maybe, too? _________________
 the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
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				|  发表于: 2011-02-25 19:24:40    发表主题: |   |  
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	  | the raindrop to drip into my poems 
 Wonderful!
 
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 Hi, Qinghongh, Thanks a lot. Pls say "Hi" to Wen. Have a nice weekend.
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				|  发表于: 2011-02-25 19:29:55    发表主题: |   |  
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	  | good. 
 raindrops maybe?
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 Hi, 博士,you are right, I changed it. Thanks
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 yea, you are right, thank you very much
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				| Early Spring 
 Little birds fly back, chirping
 and picking snowflakes from the trees
 Ice banks melt away,
 floating and chasing the waves in the river
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