| 老山 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 05 May 2007
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-20 19:26:26    Post subject: 吟 韵 |   |  
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				| 吟 韵 
 挑灯敲韵伴清吟,
 刺破青纱隔岸闻。
 吟到人生悲乐事,
 声沉声放总消魂。
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
 Joined: 02 Oct 2006
 Posts: 14102
 Location: TORONTO
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-20 19:44:01    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 厚重,感人 |  | 
	
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		| 老山 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 05 May 2007
 Posts: 319
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-20 23:23:37    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 此帖不慎重发,但在“编辑/删除”功能项内删不掉,不知何故? |  | 
	
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		| 白云闲人 探花
 
 
 Joined: 26 Aug 2007
 Posts: 3466
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-21 07:55:43    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 意韵吟诵,情景交融! _________________
 诗中岁月,
 笛里关山.
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		| 黄洋界 探花
 
  
 Joined: 23 Mar 2007
 Posts: 3301
 Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-21 08:19:09    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 吟到消魂悲乐事,此声应允属天音! 
 欣赏老山兄吟咏之工!
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 喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰
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		| 老山 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 05 May 2007
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-21 21:24:41    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢白水、白云闲人、黄洋界各位的点评! |  | 
	
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		| 笑聊 探花
 
 
 Joined: 05 Jan 2010
 Posts: 3448
 Location: 中国江苏无锡
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-22 03:38:07    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 吟到人生悲乐事, 声沉声放总消魂。
 
 声情并茂!问好老山老师!
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
 Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-22 09:12:16    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 虎啸龙吟,十分难得。现在能吟诵古韵之人已不多。 |  | 
	
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		| 王君明 秀才
 
  
 Joined: 03 Apr 2007
 Posts: 250
 Location: 甘肃天水
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-24 08:02:29    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 吟到人生悲乐事, 声沉声放总消魂。
 
 吟之高境也,學習。
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 虚拟网络 真实生活
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		| 冰清 同进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-24 10:34:11    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 次韵奉和《吟韵》 
 雕彤题画喜龙吟,
 虎啸山丘处处闻。
 吟得从容气出唱,
 此身未驾已销魂。
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		| 胡恢宗 秀才
 
  
 Joined: 15 Mar 2008
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-24 23:50:39    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 步韵奉和 曾听老友作龙吟,诗会咏坛时有闻。
 更见同仁夸韵雅,古声古调令销魂。
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 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞
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		| 秋叶 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 17 Feb 2007
 Posts: 769
 
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				|  Posted: 2011-02-25 22:33:16    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 几位唱和俱佳,偶亦次韵奉和一首,以博一笑: ---记上次与白水,庆宏兄等诗友们吃饭回来后真实的一幕。
 
 肚屙肚疼直呻吟,半夜起床不可闻。
 五次三番停不住,要生要死要丢魂。
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