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吟 韵
老山
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 19:26:26    Post subject: 吟 韵 Reply with quote

吟 韵

挑灯敲韵伴清吟,
刺破青纱隔岸闻。
吟到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总消魂。
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 19:44:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

厚重,感人
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老山
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 23:23:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

此帖不慎重发,但在“编辑/删除”功能项内删不掉,不知何故?
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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PostPosted: 2011-02-21 07:55:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

意韵吟诵,情景交融!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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PostPosted: 2011-02-21 08:19:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟到消魂悲乐事,此声应允属天音!

欣赏老山兄吟咏之工!
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老山
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PostPosted: 2011-02-21 21:24:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水、白云闲人、黄洋界各位的点评!
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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PostPosted: 2011-02-22 03:38:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总消魂。

声情并茂!问好老山老师!
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2011-02-22 09:12:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

虎啸龙吟,十分难得。现在能吟诵古韵之人已不多。
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王君明
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PostPosted: 2011-02-24 08:02:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总消魂。

吟之高境也,學習。
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虚拟网络 真实生活
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2011-02-24 10:34:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

次韵奉和《吟韵》

雕彤题画喜龙吟,
虎啸山丘处处闻。
吟得从容气出唱,
此身未驾已销魂。
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胡恢宗
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PostPosted: 2011-02-24 23:50:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

步韵奉和
曾听老友作龙吟,诗会咏坛时有闻。
更见同仁夸韵雅,古声古调令销魂。
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水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞
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秋叶
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PostPosted: 2011-02-25 22:33:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

几位唱和俱佳,偶亦次韵奉和一首,以博一笑:
---记上次与白水,庆宏兄等诗友们吃饭回来后真实的一幕。

肚屙肚疼直呻吟,半夜起床不可闻。
五次三番停不住,要生要死要丢魂。
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