老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
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Posted: 2011-02-20 19:26:26 Post subject: 吟 韵 |
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吟 韵
挑灯敲韵伴清吟,
刺破青纱隔岸闻。
吟到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总消魂。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-20 19:44:01 Post subject: |
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厚重,感人 |
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老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
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Posted: 2011-02-20 23:23:37 Post subject: |
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此帖不慎重发,但在“编辑/删除”功能项内删不掉,不知何故? |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2011-02-21 07:55:43 Post subject: |
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意韵吟诵,情景交融! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-21 08:19:09 Post subject: |
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吟到消魂悲乐事,此声应允属天音!
欣赏老山兄吟咏之工! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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老山 秀才
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 319
老山Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-21 21:24:41 Post subject: |
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谢谢白水、白云闲人、黄洋界各位的点评! |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-22 03:38:07 Post subject: |
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吟到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总消魂。
声情并茂!问好老山老师! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2011-02-22 09:12:16 Post subject: |
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虎啸龙吟,十分难得。现在能吟诵古韵之人已不多。 |
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王君明 秀才

Joined: 03 Apr 2007 Posts: 250 Location: 甘肃天水 王君明Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-24 08:02:29 Post subject: |
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吟到人生悲乐事,
声沉声放总消魂。
吟之高境也,學習。 _________________ 虚拟网络 真实生活 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-24 10:34:11 Post subject: |
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次韵奉和《吟韵》
雕彤题画喜龙吟,
虎啸山丘处处闻。
吟得从容气出唱,
此身未驾已销魂。 |
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胡恢宗 秀才

Joined: 15 Mar 2008 Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-24 23:50:39 Post subject: |
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步韵奉和
曾听老友作龙吟,诗会咏坛时有闻。
更见同仁夸韵雅,古声古调令销魂。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕 林深鸟竞飞 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
秋叶Collection |
Posted: 2011-02-25 22:33:16 Post subject: |
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几位唱和俱佳,偶亦次韵奉和一首,以博一笑:
---记上次与白水,庆宏兄等诗友们吃饭回来后真实的一幕。
肚屙肚疼直呻吟,半夜起床不可闻。
五次三番停不住,要生要死要丢魂。 |
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