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PostPosted: 2011-01-12 18:00:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 13:47:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢MM Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 18:00:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

偶好不容易爬上来。中途被摔下网站N多次,呜呜呜,姐姐spring
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 18:59:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

MM小心噢,你摔痛了白大帅哥会心痛的 Wink
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 19:17:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

是姐姐呀,还是‘帅哥’?tongue face 偶不管,就叫你姐姐want to smile
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 19:28:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

不行,这周是GG, 下周再当JJ。 我家小狗狗最近比较调皮,我要学的利害点。 Very Happy


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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 22:02:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

哦,原来还有星期之分?偶明明白啦!
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PostPosted: 2011-01-14 22:23:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄诗才令酒仙摔碗叫绝;才子脱帽鞠躬。
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 06:21:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
哦,原来还有星期之分?偶明明白啦!


GG也55 一次,MM不喜欢GG的小狗狗么? Crying or Very sad Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 06:26:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

清水正夫 wrote:
白水兄诗才令酒仙摔碗叫绝;才子脱帽鞠躬。


谢谢鼓励,问好才子。
清水就好,干嘛非加正夫,这笔名不像‘才子’倒想像‘鬼子’。Sorry, 开个玩笑 Razz
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PostPosted: 2011-01-15 17:36:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
哦,原来还有星期之分?偶明明白啦!


GG也55 一次,MM不喜欢GG的小狗狗么? Crying or Very sad Very Happy

嘻, Razz GG也像偶们女孩儿似的哭鼻子呀?!记住哦,本周你是才子,是不能哭鼻子地 Wink 偶可记住啦!一周轮换制,下周恢复你才女身份哈 Rolling Eyes
偶给你家狗狗 Twisted Evil 写诗啦!别哭了
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PostPosted: 2011-02-19 09:12:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

HI, MM, 写诗歌了 Wink
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PostPosted: 2011-02-19 22:32:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
HI, MM, 写诗歌了 Wink
O,好的,JJ,是和《冬絮》呀? Rolling Eyes 偶构思一下下哈 Razz 明天交作业 Wink
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 04:39:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

不是啦,是等你写新诗歌,比如 春花 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 17:13:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
不是啦,是等你写新诗歌,比如 春花 Very Happy Very Happy
哦,明白啦!偶在构思之中。JJ
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 19:04:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

JJ,偶写完啦!没敢发论坛上,在你能看到的〔博客〕地方 Razz Rolling Eyes Wink
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 19:13:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

私心最赏颔联并尾联,欣喜之情态可感也。
拂夜梦之拂,入声,最好用平声,似更见音律之美。孔见参酌。
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我也用惯了平水韵,但如果从“新声新韵”的角度看,是符合格律的。用普通话读全诗仍有音律之美。
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 19:46:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
JJ,偶写完啦!没敢发论坛上,在你能看到的〔博客〕地方 Razz Rolling Eyes Wink


为什么不发这边?新浪那边今天不稳定,很难登陆 Sad
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 19:51:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

老山 wrote:
私心最赏颔联并尾联,欣喜之情态可感也。
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谢谢老山的鼓励。

我的确更喜欢普通话 Razz Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2011-02-20 21:21:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

好的,偶发过来! Very Happy
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