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命运交响曲(汉/英)

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Posted: 2011-01-16 07:32:05 Post subject: 命运交响曲(汉/英)

命运交响曲碰疼砰痛—— 是命运那老鼓手用一个不肯走後门的骄傲的额头在前门紧闭的现实墙上定音 SYMPHONY OF FATE ta-ta-ta-daaaa---- it's Fate the old drummer setting the tune by beating a proud head which refuses to use the back door on the wall of reality where the front door is tightly shut _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2011-01-20 05:09:03 Post subject:

学习。问好老师！ “走”后门的走，knock the back door 是否好点？ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2011-01-20 06:29:22 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

学习。问好老师！

“走”后门的走，knock the back door 是否好点？

谢谢道模. knock the back door 是更形象些. 我可能是因为前面已用了 beating, 不想让两个太相近的动词在一起的缘故, 所以没用它.其实应该不成问题才是.
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Posted: 2011-01-20 06:45:12 Post subject:

不肯走后门前门又紧闭，这就是命运吧。再读。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2011-01-20 19:02:54 Post subject:

后门不肯走，前门紧闭着，与其说是命运，不是说是现实。

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Posted: 2011-01-20 20:59:18 Post subject:

现实中的命。How about that? _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2011-02-06 07:28:23 Post subject:

当我走近非马时希望前门和后门都开着走近非马北美有颗星，秋来日渐明。月移堤柳岸，人走翠湖清。踩梦流溪净，投石入水声。轻敲枫叶里，片片故乡情。 Sept. 6，2010，Hormish Garden of Toronto（南河书院）8:00 to 8:30 am _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2011-02-06 09:58:35 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

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前门虽设而常开; 后门虽设而常关. 问好!
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