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【英诗汉译】时间(第四首）——（法）杨允达

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Posted: 2011-01-02 04:18:58 Post subject: 【英诗汉译】时间(第四首）——（法）杨允达

Time No.4 by Maurus Young Death is a sort of enjoyment Needs to taste it alone October 17, 2009 Paris 时间第4首（法）杨允达著（中）周道模译死亡是一种享受它需要独自一人品尝 2009年10月17日巴黎 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2011-01-02 09:33:53 Post subject:

想得开

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Posted: 2011-01-02 10:44:03 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

Time No.4

by Maurus Young

Death
is a sort of enjoyment

Needs to
taste it alone

October 17, 2009 Paris

时间第4首

（法）杨允达著（中）周道模译
...

很简洁。
从英文来看， needs 的主语是 death, it 指代的也是death？翻过来的意思就是，死亡需要独自品尝自己？
再读，这个it 指的又是 enjoyment. 那么，我想译文中的‘它’可以省去。
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Posted: 2011-01-02 17:17:27 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

想得开

杨老80岁了，又是诗人，他的生死观肯定异于常人。谢读！
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Posted: 2011-01-02 17:19:41 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

Time No.4

by Maurus Young

Death
is a sort of enjoyment

Needs to
taste it alone

October 17, 2009 Paris

时间第4首

（法）杨允达著（中）周道模译
...

很简洁。
从英文来看， needs 的主语是 death, it 指代的也是death？翻过来的意思就是，死亡需要独自品尝自己？
...

你提的这个问题在别的网站也有，needs 的前面是否暗含一个：one?
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Posted: 2011-01-02 18:21:50 Post subject:

"needs 的前面是否暗含一个：one?" 这样更合乎逻辑，那英文得稍改。 _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2011-01-02 21:12:36 Post subject:

哈，捣乱一个，来个简单的：死亡是一种享受需独自品尝开溜

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Posted: 2011-01-03 04:16:33 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈，捣乱一个，来个简单的：
...

字多字少，在语气上有差别。
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Posted: 2011-01-03 16:02:04 Post subject:

这正是文字的魅力所在

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