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五绝风雪抒情（古韵英译）

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qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-11-18 09:51:08 Post subject: 五绝风雪抒情（古韵英译）

五绝风雪抒情 ---兼和白云老师漫天风雪舞，大地素笺铺。信步留佳句，豪情千古书。五绝英译： The Poems in the Snow By qinghong Huang The snow dances all over the sky, Spreading white paper on the earth; Confident steps print out the beautiful verses, Compiling an unforgettable book of aspiration! 白云闲人原玉：一斛珠 - 暢韵通途瑶池玉羽，娇憨灵动花姿趣，風唱揚波翩跹舞。似画如图，景致馨园圃。神清氣爽徐闲步，漫空诗意呈佳句，信手拈來添情愫。暢韵通途，咏赋年华渡！

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Posted: 2010-11-18 16:19:06 Post subject:

豪情千古书 - 好句! 谢庆宏和诗! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-11-18 20:04:26 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

豪情千古书 - 好句!
谢庆宏和诗!

谢谢白云老师雅赏。

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Posted: 2010-11-19 00:34:15 Post subject:

豪情千古书，佳句字玑珠。学习了。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

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Posted: 2010-11-19 05:01:23 Post subject:

雪中亦有乐趣 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2010-11-19 08:43:12 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

豪情千古书，佳句字玑珠。学习了。

谢恢宗兄雅赏。

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Posted: 2010-11-19 08:43:59 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

雪中亦有乐趣

谢寒水兄赏评。

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Posted: 2010-11-20 22:08:32 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

五绝风雪抒情
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白云老师，庆宏兄，唱和俱佳，拜读了，偶也即和一首，请指教：

枫林秋色晚，层层彩霞铺。
思绪如泉涌，真情淡墨书。

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Posted: 2010-11-21 05:26:50 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

五绝风雪抒情
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白云老师，庆宏兄，唱和俱佳，拜读了，偶也即和一首，请指教：
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谢秋叶兄和诗！

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Posted: 2010-11-21 09:02:53 Post subject:

思绪如泉涌，豪情淡墨书 - 好句！問好秋叶！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-11-22 02:10:46 Post subject:

五绝风雪抒情 ---兼和白云老师漫天风雪舞，大地素签铺。信步留佳句，豪情千古书。五绝英译： The Poems in the Snow By qinghong Huang The snow dances in the sky， Spreading white papers on the earth; Our footprints leave beautiful poem lines, Compiling an unforgettable book of aspiration!

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Posted: 2010-11-23 07:12:34 Post subject:

大地铺纸，风雪几多。人生脚印，写诗写歌。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-11-23 07:24:18 Post subject:

庆宏好雅兴！律诗英译，古韵新音。生活雅兴，舒怀暢吟！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-11-23 10:15:13 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

庆宏好雅兴！

律诗英译，古韵新音。
生活雅兴，舒怀暢吟！

写写白云老师鼓励及和诗！

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Posted: 2010-11-30 15:25:16 Post subject:

律诗英译，古韵新音。生活雅兴，舒怀暢吟！南北荟萃，中外古今 A B C D ，流水行云临屏开心一个

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Posted: 2010-11-30 16:41:13 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

律诗英译，古韵新音。
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谢谢白水兄！

古韵英译有点象穿马褂打领带，有些不伦不类。我只是尝试一下。其实古韵中的格律和对仗等等表达方式是无法英译的，但这些特点恰恰体现了中国传统诗词的音韵美和对称美。

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Posted: 2010-11-30 20:30:15 Post subject:

凑个热闹：北美枫林客，逍遥自在吟。一书风景绝，师友可交心。问好师友们！

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Posted: 2010-12-01 08:35:07 Post subject:

庆宏，说得好：诗词的音韵美和对仗美，深深的展现，源远流长！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-12-01 08:43:28 Post subject:

笑聊，楓林客，自在吟，互关心！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2010-12-01 11:11:27 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

大地铺纸，风雪几多。
人生脚印，写诗写歌。

快乐人生，庆宏。钦佩、学习!

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