莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 00:42:18 Post subject: 抒怀 |
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静思后,竹新秀、艳丽幽兰透。
怕春溜,桃如豆、只盼东风久。
原格式为“醉妆词” |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-03-31 07:26:20 Post subject: |
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清新
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 16:15:44 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
清新
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谢谢大哥点评 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 16:53:27 Post subject: |
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怕春溜——最喜这句了。“怕”“溜”二字妙得很! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-03-31 18:56:59 Post subject: |
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荷梦 wrote: |
怕春溜——最喜这句了。“怕”“溜”二字妙得很! |
谢谢  |
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不亦悦乎 童生
Joined: 02 Apr 2007 Posts: 40
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Posted: 2007-04-02 12:31:17 Post subject: |
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喜欢结句。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-02 17:22:27 Post subject: |
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谢谢!欢迎到来!  |
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