莹雪
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静思后，竹新秀、艳丽幽兰透。
怕春溜，桃如豆、只盼东风久。
原格式为“醉妆词” |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-03-31 07:26:20 Post subject: |
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为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2007-03-31 16:15:44 Post subject: |
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谢谢大哥点评 |
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荷梦
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| Posted: 2007-03-31 16:53:27 Post subject: |
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| 怕春溜——最喜这句了。“怕”“溜”二字妙得很！ |
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2007-03-31 18:56:59 Post subject: |
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| 荷梦 wrote: |
| 怕春溜——最喜这句了。“怕”“溜”二字妙得很！ |
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不亦悦乎
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| Posted: 2007-04-02 12:31:17 Post subject: |
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| 喜欢结句。 |
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莹雪
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| Posted: 2007-04-02 17:22:27 Post subject: |
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谢谢！欢迎到来！ |
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