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笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-12 11:38:48 Post subject: 七律-静思

文/笑聊秋山远黛淡烟笼，出岫轻云带劲风。落日存心怀暖阙，晚霞随意点苍穹。艳枫飒爽迎诗客，流水回环灌劲松。看得人间多少事，闲心莫若鹤飞同。注：住院期间静思偶得。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-11-12 16:29:35 Post subject:

笑聊,住院医疗后,感觉如何! 最重要的是:自己对自己要有信心,要抱乐覌开怀之心态,则身体便会迅速康复! 請保持:"艳楓飒爽迎诗客"的乐覌心境! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2010-11-12 17:55:44 Post subject:

"看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同“ 笑聊兄毕竟是豁达之人，现在康复得怎样？问好！第六句的”贯“字是否应为”灌“？ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-12 18:36:49 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

笑聊,住院医疗后,感觉如何! 最重要的是:自己对自己要有信心,要抱乐覌开怀之心态,则身体便会迅速康复!
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到目前为止，术前检查才结束。下周一上午手术。

谢谢老师宽慰！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-12 18:44:39 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

"看得人间多少事,闲心莫若鹤飞同“
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谢谢黄老师关怀！贯实为灌。谢谢。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2010-11-12 20:51:25 Post subject:

笑聊兄多保重！祝笑聊兄手术顺利早日康复！

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-12 23:37:02 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

笑聊兄多保重！祝笑聊兄手术顺利早日康复！

谢谢庆宏兄关怀！谢谢师友们的关心！

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2010-11-13 03:41:45 Post subject:

秋山远黛罩群峰前有秋山后有群峰不合理 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-13 03:47:54 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

秋山远黛罩群峰

前有秋山后有群峰不合理

讲得有道理。容我斟酌。

秋山远黛淡烟笼，出岫轻云带劲风。

这样行么？

白云闲人
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Posted: 2010-11-13 08:42:25 Post subject:

祝笑聊手术順利,身体迅速康复! 以更精彩的词筆,和朋友們舒怀唱和! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-13 23:55:24 Post subject:

谢谢老师关怀！等手术后，和师友们唱和：用彩云做笺，采甘露研墨，抒豪情以为山河点缀；续婉约尝试百花竞放。歌红枫而唱北美；赋四季而赢灿烂。、、、、、、谢谢师友们的关怀！约十五天左右不能上网，我会想念师友们！

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2010-11-14 00:43:19 Post subject:

祝笑聊老师手术顺利，早日恢复健康。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

冰清
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Posted: 2010-11-18 11:40:23 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

谢谢老师关怀！
等手术后，和师友们唱和：用彩云做笺，采甘露研墨，抒豪情以为山河点缀；续婉约尝试百花竞放。歌红枫而唱北美；赋四季而赢灿烂。、、、、、、

谢谢师友们的关怀！约十五天左右不能上网，我会想念师友们！
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刚看到，愣神儿。

祷祝声声：盼早日康复!

柳无歌者无聊
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Posted: 2010-11-20 07:47:25 Post subject:

来问候笑聊老师祝早日康复

柳无歌者无聊
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Posted: 2010-11-20 07:47:47 Post subject:

来问候笑聊老师祝早日康复

白水
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Posted: 2010-11-20 14:47:58 Post subject:

问好笑聊，盼你早日康复。

秋叶
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Posted: 2010-11-20 22:43:34 Post subject:

看得人间多少事，闲心莫若鹤飞同。同感也，笑聊兄保重。

吟风道人
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Posted: 2010-11-24 17:11:54 Post subject:

蕴藉闲逸，劲赏！ _________________ 懒道人莲池醉月，癫居士竹径吟风。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-27 02:35:47 Post subject:

胡恢宗 wrote:

祝笑聊老师手术顺利，早日恢复健康。

谢谢胡兄关怀！问好！

你我兄弟相称，老师断不敢当。

笑聊
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Posted: 2010-11-27 02:37:42 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

刚看到，愣神儿。
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谢谢冰清老师关怀，问好！

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